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demonjun 发表于 2010-3-27 18:35   只看TA 11楼
以赌带起剧情的发展,引伸出一系列的色情描写,很有功底!
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该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2011-2-17 16:17   只看TA 12楼
故事情节设置十分曲折，情节跌宕起伏，写的很精彩真有想象力LZ的确是费不少
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jaojun2009 发表于 2011-2-17 16:51   只看TA 13楼
楼主写的不错，情节设计也很有悬念，结局也很好，支持楼主。
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liyantian 发表于 2012-2-6 21:23   只看TA 14楼
楼主 确实写了一篇好文章 可以说是极品！
内容亦现代又有一种古感！绝对精品！！！
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